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The Right to Remain Mine
Contemporary Adult Romance*
Champagne Books
ISBN : 9781926996783
Legnth : 79,000 words - 193 pages
Available : February 2012
In Ebook and later in Print
*Sexually Explicit Scenes and Language
You have the right to remain cherished. Anything you read or scream out in ecstasy can and will be used against you in the bedroom of Willow DeVane. You have the right to enjoy a big, sexy cop. If you can’t find your own, one by the name of Raith Malloy will be provided for you to enjoy and explore thoroughly within these pages.
Tempers flare from the first moment divorce lawyer Willow DeVane crosses paths with sheriff deputy Raith Malloy. Both too stubborn and controlling for their own good, Willow and Raith butt heads until anger turns to passion, and they begin an affair despite their brewing hostilities. But more than one force works against them when they learn Willow’s being targeted by a dangerous stalker.
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“You have a red mark,” he murmured, lifting his hand to her forehead. But as soon as he barely brushed the pads of his fingers over the spot, Willow gasped and grabbed a hold of his wrist, stopping him.
Grateful he didn’t comment on the tears she rapidly blinked away, she ignored the hot blush covering her body as his gaze turned gentle.
“Jesus,” he breathed. “You don’t even know how to defend yourself.”
Willow frowned and jerked her hand from his. “I would’ve kicked him in the nuts if he hadn’t tackled me from behind.” Now that he’d stopped jostling her, she grew steadier.
Malloy shook his head. “I’m serious, DeVane. If you’re going to represent slime like Franklin on a regular basis, you need to invest in some protection.”
“What? I sharpen my claws nightly,” Willow smarted back with a cheeky smirk. “Doesn’t that count?”
He sighed. “There’re some self-defence classes at the Y. You’re enrolling in one of them. Today.”
She arched a brow, amused by his authoritative tone of voice. “Is that a command, Sergeant?”
“It’s Lieutenant, not Sergeant,” he growled, stepping closer. “And you bet your sweet ass it’s a command.”
If he was trying to intimidate her by breaching Willow’s personal space, it wasn’t working. The more clearly she could smell his musky male scent, the more she wanted him to linger—a realization which daunted her more than his massive, hovering bulk could. She edged a micro-step backward and snorted. “Get real, Malloy. I’m not paying for some stupid class just to make you feel better.”
His eyes sparked as he pressed even closer. “Yes, you are. Or I’m calling your daddy and telling him exactly what just happened.”
Gasping, Willow’s mouth fell open. “You wouldn’t.”
He grinned. “You’ll learn some self-defence if I have to teach you myself.”
That caused her to laugh. “Oh, I’d just love to watch you teach a girl how to defend herself.”
He lifted his brows. “I could teach you a hell of a lot more than you know now.”
“Fine, then,” she said, lifting her chin. “You’re on.”
Malloy paused. Blinking as if he’d just caught the punch line of a joke and it wasn’t so funny, he straightened. “What?”
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Book that Thing! (4 stars)
It’s always a good sign when the book you’re reading starts out with one of your favourite phrases. “You’ve gotta be kidding me...” I say that all the time even though I’m German.
Let’s have a look at the cover. You’ll want to give the artist a big fat smooch. It really is great and captures the blurb perfectly. Looking at it I formed certain expectations and I’m happy the author didn’t disappoint.
Raith Malloy is my kind of hero. Honestly, his name alone made me quiver with excitement. He’s also moody, demanding and overbearing. I loved it! Kage has a (for lack of a better word) very visual writing style. I could easily picture not just Malloy in action, but pretty much every scene in this book. There was depth to both the characters and the plot. I should mention the length. 193 pages: not a full length novel – not a short story either. Kage made sure not to rush anything. The cop versus attorney theme was a risk. Thank heavens she took it. Hatred had to morph into attraction and attraction into...well, y’all like a happily ever after as much as I do, right?! The journey was...just...awesome!! It truly was “instant lust” that hit them like a ton of bricks. The author built up the tension (on both ends of the love-hate scale) step by step. Loved the fact that Kage switched points of view. Brilliant...how they tried – very unsuccessfully – to outsmart each other.
Kudos not just for the development of hero and heroine as individuals and as a couple, but also the very real portrayal of their respective occupations. To me it felt like real cop talk. The fact that Malloy had one failed marriage under his belt made it all the more believable. At least I imagine that the divorce rate among people on the force is high. Willow had to be just as tough as Raith; otherwise it would’ve never worked between them. Hooray for not being a cry-baby. She pulled it together in situations when most people would’ve lost it completely.
Even though the plot mainly revolved around Raith and Willow, the secondary characters played a big part as well. They, too, were very true to themselves. By the end of the story I felt like I’d known them for years already.
The best part? There’s history between the main characters none of them were aware of at first. You’ll be pleasantly surprised, I promise. Some might find Malloy’s initial reaction to a life changing surprise not so great, but in my opinion it was the only way to do it. He really was a grumpy d***sometimes. Weirdly enough it’s exactly what made him so lovable.
I didn’t like the reason for a certain someone stalking Willow. It’s hard to explain without giving away too much, but I just think what this person had to endure didn’t quite fit the possible consequences for his actions later on. Maybe the author should’ve given us a little more insight into his mental lexicon.
Also, the husband of Willow’s best friend had issues with Malloy in the beginning. They disappeared, but didn’t get resolved. There’s a difference! And let me just add that I’m totally on Dylan’s side on this one.
I also didn’t like where Raith ended up job-wise in the end. He clearly stated he wasn’t interested in going down this road beforehand. I think it was supposed to seem like he didn’t really mean it. A ~ secret desire to be denied at all costs ~ kind of situation. It didn’t feel like one to me, though. Just one sentence / thought about how he’s so glad he changed his mind would’ve done the trick.
The verdict: DO NOT MISS!!! A very entertaining “hot little number”. :-) Kage once again delivered! You should put her on your auto-buy list. NOW!"
Ramblings from a Chaotic Mind (2.75 Books)
"I really liked the premise of this book however I found it to be riddled with things that rubbed me the wrong way. First off Raith. I love take charge alpha guys but I never got past how completely mean and awful Raith is to Willow throughout the entire book. I have never seen two more prickly characters. They constantly are fighting. Constantly giving each other snide comments and hurting each others feelings. Over-thinking everything imaginable and working on assumptions about every person they see the other with. I think they went way past the banter and straight into annoying territory. I spent a lot of my time shaking my head at their conversations. Raith is condescending about everything to Willow. Yes, she deserved a lot of it with her immature behavior but wow…I think if a guy talked to me like Raith talked to Willow, first I’d knock his head off and then I’d kick him out of my house. I don’t care how good the sex is. But she takes it. Raith is like some kind of sick drug to her. She doesn’t like him, they fight, and yet she keeps taking it because the sex is great.
From the blurb the book sounds like a romantic suspense however I didn’t see it as such. Willow is attacked in the courthouse at the very beginning and yet that has nothing to do with the actual plot. Its convenient yes, but you never hear or see the guy responsible after that incident. Instead we get two minor altercations through out the book before something big happens. In between this is completely a contemporary romance. The threat seems to pop up when its needed but if it were a sustained threat it would have worked much better with the genre.There needed to be more happening to Willow on the stalker front then the feeble tricks that we got.
The level of writing was pretty good but I wouldn’t say it was on the level that a lot of romantic suspense authors at your local bookstore are at. Some of the conversations felt jilted and incomplete. The characters didn’t feel rounded and so they came off to me as one dimensional. There were a few spots in the book that I really enjoyed but they seemed to be few and far between . While I wanted to like this one much more then I did, my problems connecting with the characters left me wanting more from the book then what I was given."
Amazon Review (4 stars)
"I do love a cop romance, and this one gives us a very virile, dominating and surly hero. I have a thing for jerk heroes, those men you don't know whether you'd rather slap or kiss them first. Raith is pretty much that man, deserving of some abuse but so charming and likeable despite his flaws. He does damaged hero pretty well, and he has bitterness down to a fine art. But underneath that snark and bitterness, we see a man in need of love. He actually longs for it, wanting very much to be connected to a woman, to have companionship, and this very longing scares him to death.
And how does he deal with it? In a manly, wishy-washy way, of course. One minute, he's in deep with the heroine, Willow; the next, he's pushing her away and accusing her of things she's not guilty of. He's so possessive of her, so jealous of any man around her; yet, he cannot help but want to put some distance between them. He's that wound up about her. And I loved this push and pull. It led to all sorts of sexual tension and chemistry. All that verbal foreplay was yummy. These two hated each other, but more so, they hated wanting each other.
Overall, this was a good read for me, but a few little things kept it from being a great read. And that disappointed me. What I didn't like-- the heroine has a couple of TSTL moments. I like a strong heroine, but one who's stupidly willful? Not so much. For the most part, I did like Willow; I just needed her to be a bit smarter about her stalker/intruder. Not listening to advice and leaving her back door unlocked was not a good way to show a man how independent she is. Also, after their misunderstanding, I thought Raith could have grovelled more and that Willow could have been more than just perturbed with him. And concerning the stalker, Raith definitely needed more grovel time on that point.
Even with all that, there was just something about this story and this hero that really pulls a reader in. It has some great sexual tension going for it, and the interaction between h/H made the whole book. It's 244 kindle pages of opposites attracting and hating every minute of it. These two really tried to resist each other, but that magnetism was just too strong and exciting. So this is very much a book to read if you love sexy cops, opposites attracting, a strong caveman alpha who wants to protect his woman, and the theme of enemies to lovers. Even with a few quibbles, this was a good read for me of a new-to-me author. What I read here, I liked a lot, making me eager to check out more titles by this author.
Another Amazon Review (4 stars)
"This was my first book by this author but it will NOT be my last. I love her "voice". I was looking for specific items when I started this book and found all of them. Yet there is a reason this book is not a five star for me.
Jealous? Check.
Possessive? Check.
No cheating. Check.
Heroine likeable? Check.
Chemistry? Check.
So Raith has wanted our heroine Willow, who he calls DeVane since he saw her two years ago. But she's 10 years younger and socially more advanced then him. Her family has money and she is a junior partner in a law firm so she does well. He is bitter about his divorce because he has to pay alimony to his cheating ex-wife.
Everytime they see each other he tries to get under her skin because he wants her BAD and figures she wouldn't look at a schmuck like him. She knows he purposely tries to get arise out her her, but she doesn't know why. So she gets attacked by a client in front of him, and she demands that if he wants her to learn self defense, he better teach it to her.
Therefore he goes over to her place teach her and what I ADORED about this book was you got his thoughts. It was nice, he was nervous, he was worried and he was jealous. Everytime he saw her with a man, he saw red. Everytime he heard about some man she had dated, his "murder list" would grow. And I liked Willow even though we got more POV from Raith she was great.
Why not a five? Raith is my definition of a punk-hero. He knows he wants her but he's so busy being scared that she doesn't want him, that he's a jerk. Example and this is a BIG spoiler so do not read if you want to miss:
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